How to Write a Wedding Haiku
Start with a single image or moment from the wedding. Not "love" in the abstract, as that's too vague and it'll read like a greeting card. Think instead about a concrete detail: rings on a velvet cushion, champagne bubbles rising, two shadows merging into one on a dance floor. The best poems anchor themselves in something you can see, touch, or hear.
Once you've got your image, count your syllables carefully. The first line gets five, the second gets seven, the third gets five again. A common mistake is forcing words to fit the count, which produces lines that sound awkward when read aloud. If you have to mangle your syntax to hit seventeen syllables, scrap the line and start fresh. Another frequent error is ending with a generic statement like "love will last forever." That's a bumper sticker, not poetry. End with an image or a surprising turn instead.
Here's a hot take: the third line should do the most work. It's where the emotional punch lives. Think of lines one and two as the setup, and line three as the payoff, a twist, a zoom-in, or a quiet revelation that reframes everything before it. Read your haiku out loud before you commit to it. Poetry lives in the mouth, not on the page. If you stumble over a phrase or it sounds stilted, your audience will feel it too. And don't rhyme your haiku. Traditional haiku doesn't rhyme, and forcing a rhyme into seventeen syllables almost always sounds like a limerick that lost its way.